Diary Entry Week 7

I  have acted upon the advise and criticism i received from my peers and got my final cut completed in time for the deadline. I made a few changes to my front cover, such as adding a few more small extras into the bottom on the page to fill up the dead space. Also I changed the bullet points into stars as is this would be following more conventions and looks better overall. My contents also had a few little changes made to it, such as I edited a brick wall onto the background as the plain background on the image was too boring and looked plain. I also added in more features on the right hand side as i was told that it was too empty and bare. On my double page spread, I had a total shift around of the layout due to the evolution of my ideas, for example the image was changed and the article was moved around and extended until I found the correct position for it.